Elevated Rage 1

I HATE THIS PAGE! Still do after all these years. My flaws as an artist stands naked before me. Drawing 'normal' people is hard, even if you've got photo references in front of you. The positioning is awkward and the clothes unconvincing. The third panel shouldn't be wide angle. They're in a elevator, not waiting for a bus. The panel should cut off at the waist, pulling them tight together and making it claustrophobic. Like the last panel though.

BTX